i'm standing in the darkness
all alone by myself
the bell of death suddenly rings
it's voice wake me up
at that time i realize
that i...
ALREADY DIE
all alone by myself
the bell of death suddenly rings
it's voice wake me up
at that time i realize
that i...
ALREADY DIE
chapter 1: Wondering Girl
Today is a cold snowy day in this side country of japan.A cold night that you must wear a thick clocthes..
But there is a girl that only wear a shirt and black short skirt with a scarf walking around without any direction nor a place to stay.but in that little girl eyes,a reflection of her eyes like saying that she was looking for something.
"i..must find it"that girl said "the key..."
"the key to save tha...."
her word are suddenly stopped..
that girl was fainted in the middle of nowhere,no people are around...
A boy that pass around the area that girl fainted,bring her to his home to save her from the Death.
--to be continued--
Today is a cold snowy day in this side country of japan.A cold night that you must wear a thick clocthes..
But there is a girl that only wear a shirt and black short skirt with a scarf walking around without any direction nor a place to stay.but in that little girl eyes,a reflection of her eyes like saying that she was looking for something.
"i..must find it"that girl said "the key..."
"the key to save tha...."
her word are suddenly stopped..
that girl was fainted in the middle of nowhere,no people are around...
A boy that pass around the area that girl fainted,bring her to his home to save her from the Death.
--to be continued--
2 Dessert:
Pake b,indo aja ya, b,ing saya jeleeeeeeeek banget, hehe.
Pertama, nama negara itu awal hurufnya pakai huruf kapital.
Kedua, setelah titik ada 2 space.
Ketiga, setelah tanda kutip, kata pertama yag ada di dalam kutip itu huruf pertamanya harus huruf gede dan dibelakanganya ada tanda baca. Ex: "I..must find it," that girl said "the key..."
Okay itu aja, anyways your english is good, and i like your idea XDD
trima kasih senpai...saia usahakan...:)
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